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J.M.S. Tanjim's avatar

It's not been long since I finished reading Death in Venice by Thomas Mann. I read the Clayton Coelb translation. I loved how Mann handled such a sensitive issue under the veneer of such beautiful language. I still haven't watched the Visconti film adaptation. But I checked out your poem. It's beautifully rendered, I must say.

"...The last gasp of innocence

Dead in the air." It's gonna stay stay with me. It's gonna stay because of the hint at the influence on both the character and the child actor that played it. And you put it into your work just perfectly. Good job! (From a fellow rookie poet.)

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william lexton-jones's avatar

Lovey poem, Ruth

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